problem solution ielts essay

IELTS problem-solution tasks are the easiest of the IELTS essay types as you are required to explain the given problem(s) and provide some relevant suggestions/solutions. In this IELTS Task 2 Writing guide, we will take a look at how to produce a well-written essay for an IELTS writing task 2 problem and solution task.

1. Problem/Solution Overview

A problem and solution essay is a common type of IELTS writing task 2 essay question.

Remember, there are five main types of writing task 2 questions:

  • Advantage/disadvantage
  • Discussion
  • Double question
  • Problem/solution
  • Opinion

You will have 40 minutes to write at least 250 words which you use to explain one or more of the following

  • A common problem/ problems in the world
  • A cause/causes of a problem
  • A possible solution/solutions

1.1 Understanding the question

There are a few different ways that a problem/solution question may be worded and it is important to understand exactly what you are being asked to do.

Here are the three main types of problem/solution question aims:

  1. Write about a problem and possible solutions to that problem
  2. Write about a cause of a problem and possible solutions
  3. Only write about the solutions

And here are some ways the question may be worded for each aim:

  1. What problems arise from this and how can they be tackled?
  2. What do you think the causes are? What are the solutions?
  3. What solution can you suggest to deal with this problem?

Identifying common synonyms in the instruction words will also help you to identify the aim:

Problem: Situation; resulting in…; issue

Cause: Reason; why

The only solution: address; present; solve; improve; tackle; remedy; deal with

Take the time to read the question carefully! It is a common mistake to answer the wrong question.

1.2 Example problem/solution questions

Here are some example problem/solution questions. Try to work out what the aim is for each question:

Topic 1

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

Topic 2

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Topic 3

One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion
What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Topic 4

More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list.
What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve the problem?

Topic 5

In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction.
What measures could be taken to prevent this?

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2. Essay Structure for Problem/Solution Essays

You will see more than one way to structure a problem/solution IELTS essay. We’ve given you two options to choose from that are nice and easy to follow and enable you to produce a clear and cohesive essay everytime:

Essay structure 1

Introduction
  1. Paraphrase the given IELTS statement and question
  2. State the problem/cause/solution
  3. State what your essay will do
Main body paragraph 1
  • Topic sentence giving the first problem
  • Explain the first problem
  • Give an example
  • Give a solution solution to the first problem
Main body paragraph 2
  • Topic sentence giving the second problem
  • Explain the second problem
  • Give an example
  • Give a solution solution to the second problem
Conclusion
  • Paraphrase yourself: summarise the key points in your body paragraphs
  • Give your opinion
  • Suggest a future consequence

Essay structure 2

Introduction
  1. Paraphrase the given IELTS statement and question
  2. State the problem/cause/solution
  3. State what your essay will do
Main body paragraph 1
  • Topic sentence giving the problem(s)/ cause(s)
  • Explain the problem(s)/ cause(s)
  • Give example(s) to support your claims
  • Repeat the process if you want to give another problem/cause
Main body paragraph 2
  • Topic sentence giving the solution(s)
  • Explain the solution(s)
  • Give example(s) to support your claims
Conclusion
  • Paraphrase yourself: summarise the key points in your body paragraphs
  • Give your opinion
  • Suggest a future consequence

Note that essay structure 2 suggests that it is an option to write about more than one problem and solution. In fact, the essay question will usually ask for problems and solutions in the plural.

However, it is acceptable to write about one problem and solution so that you fully develop your ideas rather than rushing through your essay and missing any important examples or explanations.

Why not time yourself writing an essay in test conditions and see what option works for you!

3. Planning your Problem/Solution Essay

Taking the time to plan your essay will really make a big difference. Read on for some useful tips to help your planning.

3.1 Identify keywords and phrases

It’s a good idea to start your planning by  confirming the topic of your essay by locating the topic words.

Here’s the question for our model 9 band writing task 2 answer at the end of this guide:

Some people think that children nowadays are spending an excessive amount of time watching TV or using a computer or mobile phone.

Describe some of the problems that too much screen time can have for children, and what can be done to tackle them.

The topic of this essay is about the amount of time children spend using screens (TV, computer, mobile phones).

By looking at the instruction words, we can see this question also asks for problems and solutions in the plural form (although remember it is ok to focus on a single problem and solution in the exam).

3.2 Organise your ideas

A list is a great way to organise your ideas before you start writing your IELTS essay about problem and solution. Your ideas do not have to be elaborate or in-depth, just put pen to paper and start to jot down some ideas for an IELTS essay. You could choose to only write down ideas you will use in your essay, or you might end up with more than you need (we suggest ticking off the ideas you use to avoid repetition)

We have used a simple bullet point list to note down ideas for our model essay:

Problems:

  • Childhood obesity
  • Addiction
  • Mental health issues
  • Targeted junk food adverts

Solutions:

  • Government incentives for active children
  • Limited screen time imposed by parents
  • Lessons to educate children on the dangers of too much screen time
  • Restrictions on adverts at certain times

3.3 Identify vocabulary

Writing down any useful vocabulary for IELTS that comes to mind during the planning process could improve your score in Lexical resources. Ask yourself if you know any idioms, collocations or other unusual IELTS essay vocabulary linked to your essay topic.

4. Writing your Problem/Solution Essay

4.1 Introduction

There are three key things to include in your problem/solution introduction:

  1. Paraphrase the given IELTS statement and question
  2. State the problem/cause/solution
  3. State what your essay will do

To successfully paraphrase the statement, you can use synonyms, change the word order or change the word class (e.g from a noun to an adjective). The tricky part is making sure you keep the meaning of the statement the same. Look what we’ve done for our model answer:

IELTS StatementParaphrased Statement
Some people think that children nowadays are spending an excessive amount of time watching TV or using a computer or mobile phone.

Describe some of the problems that too much screen time can have for children, and what can be done to tackle them.

Nowadays, governments and health experts around the world have become increasingly concerned about the general health of children. They are particularly worried about problems caused by too much time spent in front of a TV, computer or mobile .

You can also briefly state what your essay will do using an outline statement. Here’s an example sentence:

This essay will look at these problems in more detail and propose some solutions.

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4.2 Main body paragraphs

For each problem or cause you write about, you should create a topic sentence which introduces each main idea.

Here are some possible ways you could structure your topic sentences:

  • One major problem connected to _____ is…
  • Another issue is that…
  • A final problem is the…
  • One cause of ____ is …
  • One reason for ____ is …
  • A further way to explain ____ is …
  • One contributing factor to ____ is…

You could also use the structure that + a clause. Here are some examples:

One major problem connected to childrens’ health is lack of exercise.

Another issue is that there are a large amount of junk food advertisements on television aimed at children.

As well as language for problems, you will also need to introduce solutions to these problems. Even though the topic of your essay will be different, you can learn language chunks/sentence starters to do this. Take a look at these examples:

  • To deal with this problem, _____ could …
  • The way forward might be for _____ to …
  • The solution is for people to …
  • In order to solve this issue, _____ should …

When you provide a solution, it is a good idea to keep the actor of the sentence more general, for example:

  • The government
  • Schools
  • Parents

You can also learn lexical chunks related to solutions to common problems. Here are just a few suggestions for our model answer:

  • The government could bring in a law to ban junk food advertising.
  • The government could allocate more money to healthy eating campaigns.
  • Parents could set aside time in the day to do activities as a family away from screens.
  • Schools could employ more physical education teachers to improve students’ fitness levels.

We’ve used the tips above to create the following body paragraphs:

Body Paragraph 1One major problem connected to childrens’ health is lack of exercise: in recent years , the amount of time children spend being sedentary in front of a screen has increased drastically, and as a result, childrens’ fitness levels have plummeted. This is a significant problem in the USA, for example, where children spend an increasing amount of time watching a TV screen. To try and solve this problem, governments should implement incentives for children that spend more time being active, such as giving vouchers for sport equipment or free tickets to sporting events.
Body Paragraph 2Another issue is that there are a large amount of junk food advertisements on television aimed at children. This means that children are being targeted to buy unhealthy junk food and processed meals which can lead to weight and other health problems due to the high amounts of fat and sugar in the food. The answer could be for the government to ban these adverts at certain times of the day. If they did this, children would not be subjected to these unhealthy marketing tactics.

4.3 Conclusion

Your conclusion for any IELTS writing task 2 essay is very important as without it, you will not score above a band score 6.0 in Task achievement.

Always make your conclusion easy to identify for the examiner by starting with:

  • In conclusion,…
  • To conclude,…
  • To sum up,…
  • In summary,…

Now you will need to paraphrase (again) what you have written for your introduction in your own words. Compare out model answer introduction and conclusion:

IntroductionConclusion
Nowadays, governments and health experts around the world have become increasingly concerned about the general health of children. They are particularly worried about problems caused by too much time spent in front of a TV, computer or mobile . This essay will look at these problems in more detail and propose some solutions.To sum up, there is no doubt that the problem of too much screen time is becoming increasingly serious for the youth of today. Unless action is taken urgently, these problems will only intensify. My opinion is that responsibility for reducing the amount of time in front of a screen lies mainly with the government, but also with the parents.

You can also include the following points in your conclusion (it is not necessary to include all the points):

  • State the seriousness of the problem (we’ve used the phrase ‘increasingly serious’)
  • Suggest who you think should solve the problem (we’ve gone with a balance between the government and parents)
  • Make suggestions about what to do in the future (we’ve kept this general: ‘reducing the amount of screen time’)
  • State what might happen if nothing is done to solve the problem (again, we’ve kept this general to reduce the word count: ‘these problems will only intensify’)

5. Example Problem/Solution Essay and Exercise

Below you will find the complete problem/solution essay that we have been using throughout this guide, except we have removed some of the keywords.

Your task is to select the missing words and complete the sample answer. Good luck!

5.1 Complete the Sample Problem/Solution Essay

Some people think that children nowadays are spending an excessive amount of time watching TV or using a computer or mobile phone.

Describe some of the problems that too much screen time can have for children, and what can be done to tackle them.

How to Write Problem Solution Essay in IELTS

Excercise

, governments and health experts around the world have become concerned about the general health of children. They are worried about problems caused by too much time spent in front of a TV, computer or mobile . This essay look at these problems in more detail and propose some solutions.

One problem connected to childrens’ health is lack of exercise: in years , the amount of time children spend being in front of a screen has increased , and as a result, childrens’ fitness levels have . This is a significant problem in the USA, for example, where children spend an increasing amount of time watching a TV screen. To try and solve this problem, governments should implement for children that spend time being active.

Another issue is that there are a large amount of food advertisements on television aimed at children. This means that children are being to buy unhealthy junk food and meals which can lead to weight and other health problems due to the high amounts of fat and sugar in the food. The answer could be for the government to these adverts at certain times of the day. If they did this, children would not be to these unhealthy marketing tactics.

To up, there is no doubt that the problem of too much time is becoming increasingly serious for the youth of today. action is taken urgently, these problems will only intensify. My opinion is that responsibility for reducing the amount of time in front of a screen lies mainly with the , but also with the parents.

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5.2 Problem Solution Sample Essay

Nowadays, governments and health experts around the world have become increasingly concerned about the general health of children. They are particularly worried about problems caused by too much time spent in front of a TV, computer or mobile. This essay will look at these problems in more detail and propose some solutions.

One major problem connected to childrens’ health is lack of exercise: in recent years , the amount of time children spend being sedentary in front of a screen has increased drastically, and as a result, childrens’ fitness levels have plummeted. This is a significant problem in the USA, for example, where children spend an increasing amount of time watching a TV screen. To try and solve this problem, governments should implement incentives for children that spend more time being active, such as giving vouchers for sport equipment or free tickets to sporting events.

Another issue is that there are a large amount of junk food advertisements on television aimed at children. This means that children are being targeted to buy unhealthy junk food and processed meals which can lead to weight and other health problems due to the high amounts of fat and sugar in the food. The answer could be for the government to ban these adverts at certain times of the day. If they did this, children would not be subjected to these unhealthy marketing tactics.

To sum up, there is no doubt that the problem of too much screen time is becoming increasingly serious for the youth of today. Unless action is taken urgently, these problems will only intensify. My opinion is that responsibility for reducing the amount of time in front of a screen lies mainly with the government, but also with the parents.

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